I'm sorry

I don't know how to express my feelings of being sorry, so I did the best I can here. Can you guys give me some feedback.

I'm sorry I haven't been the best of friend

I'm sorry I haven't been the best daughter

I’m sorry I haven't been someone you could rely on

I’m sorry I let you down

I’m sorry for the things I have done, and I hope you could forgive me

I’m sorry for not being by your side

I’m sorry for all the arguments

I'm sorry for the broken home I caused

I haven't been the best of friend

I haven't been the best daughter

My dear family and friends I wish you well

Reviews

[lua]

the repetition depicts so well the sadness within the apologies of the narrator, it is as though they have hit a wall, apologising for everything they have ever done

[Steven Stokes]

Really good! only thing I'd have asked for is a little more of the poem hahaha.
loved it actually was meaningful :)