The Beast

Mongrel that lives in the deepest of hell
Hidden from the world that's ours
A human or beast unable to tell
Taller than skylines of shadowing towers
Feeding off others with credible powers

Demon of hell may you rot and you burn
Ruining earth at many a cause
Your mask making everyone's stomach turn
Breaking innocent bodies and many a law
Eating one being leaves you wanting much more

Brute from below can you leave us alone
We're scared of your presence and hate
A thunder so close is you having a groan
Please leave us alone it's never to late
The damage you've caused is ever so great

Author's Note

Not my best poem but I haven't posted in a while, so enjoy :)

Reviews

[Goat]

Whoa this gave me the chills, nice job. I loved the descriptions in this poem and the emotion. Nice write!

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I think you speak with a lot heart and power in pen to be a young writer you're really awesome:)

[Imogen.E]

Thank you very much. I'm happy that you have enjoyed this :)

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Your welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

Your talent is dripping here after the thunder and rain of the soul...Bravo..................

[Imogen.E]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Just posted a new one...:)......................

[BlackRose]

Not a bad piece. You did a FAB job for someone of your age. Darkness comes in and takes over, but one/s try to break free of it.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is a marvelously written piece, for someone so young to produce such a wonderful piece amazes me. Excellent Job!

[Imogen.E]

Thanks very much for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

You are one awesome awesome writer! I'm honestly so impressed at how well you write for your age! Keep up the good work, girly, cause with talent like that I can see you going far someday. :)

[Imogen.E]

Aww thanks a lot Maggie! I'm really glad you like this thanks so much for reviewing :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

You're welcome!

[Tina Louise UK]

Chilling piece hun, really well done :) x

[Imogen.E]

Thanks a lot, I'm really glad you like this :)

[cycy]

this i actually very good Immy, don't sell yourself short doll. you did really well and the rhyming is great too. the poem is pretty descriptive too and it gets you wondering and i was specifically drawn in by the title. well written dear. you are really talented :)

[Imogen.E]

Thanks a lot, I'm really glad you like it. :)

[Ren Grace]

It's very hard to rhyme in poetry, I could never do it well. You have a great ability to write :) Amazing job!

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing, I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)

[Devesh]

Liked it a lot! Specially the way you built the rhythm. I like how you've left the beast open for interpretation, it means different things to different people. Good job! With that level of maturity in your poem, I have a hard time believing you're only 12. Thanks for sharing :)

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing. I like the style of poetry that allows the reader to use their own interpretation. I guess we just finished a half term if poetry in my school and we learned a lot about structure and how poems have different effects. I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[Devesh]

That's great! You're welcome, keep writing =)