Angel

Pretty blue eyes,
Flowing white hair.
Wherever she walks,
The world stops to stare.

Poised on her toes,
She takes her first flight.
Dusted in snow,
Still glowing so bright.

Cupid bow lips,
Of a light garnet red.
Light as a feather,
With kevlar of lead.

What sort of creature,
Could she perhaps be?
Her future is far,
What can she foresee?

Reviews

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Awesome poem:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) great title:)

[Imogen.E]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this!! :)

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I did very much:))))))))) your very welcome:)

[Reginald Van Langenhove]

Lovely poem, Imogen! Kudos.

[Imogen.E]

Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed this!

[ScottWinchester]

Extraordinary use of language and rhyme. And mystery, too; there's an enigmatic-something to this one that I like. Excellent poetry; very impressive stuff.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

[Stefanie Holmes]

Angels are such beautiful creatures and you described them perfectly. This was a lovely write. :)

~Stefanie

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you liked this :)

[Dayran]

For girls like Angel ... the world builds a beautiful chariot of vines ... flowers ... and fruits ... and pulls it along with the willing hands of people who believe in life ... beauty ... and in doing the right thing. A lovely poem.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like it :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This is so beautiful. :) It really is, it's so good. Keep up the good work, girl!

[Imogen.E]

Thanks, I really appreciate you reviewing my work and I'm glad you like it :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

No problem! :)

[Relic]

This is really well done and the image is clear an unmistakable. I like the fact that its simple and flows as would an angel in flight. Well done.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks very much for reviewing. I'm glad you like it :)

[Relic]

You're welcome my friend.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I like your form :) short and sweet and old style
Lovely opening :) well done this for me was a really lovely angelic experience thanks for sharing and keep up the good work :)

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[KeeD]

Cupid bow lips of a light garnet red, how cool is that description! LOVE IT. This is magical and an amazing write.. Write more, you're hella talented.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks a lot! I read all the time so I get a lot if descriptions from books. Thanks for reviewing and glad you like it!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words. You create a mystical character with beauty and possibility to do many things.
I like the questions in the poem. Questions are good. Make the reader get involved in the thought process of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Imogen.E]

Thank you for reviewing. We just finished a study on William Blake at school, he was a poet who talked about seeing angels a lot. Glad you enjoyed :)