there.THerE

yes

I.daresay
How are we
Today?
A little
Miss, guided.

We stand here ,
divided

And fall, we shall
Rabbit hold your    tongue
Don't be afraid    to run

Thedarkersideof
Moonshininginthenight
Let's take a walk
while
         The night
    Is still,,,,,young
A soundtrack of Animals
    -collectively

A house of Leaves is
structurally unsound
It will crumble
Two the ground.

Author's Note

let me entertain you

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

wow great job the grammar problems were a little distracting but overall awesome poem

[Becca Bishop]

Besides the grammar problems, I thought this poem was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!! Really loved the lines, "A little misguided/ We stand here divided" even if they're in different stanzas my mind instantly connected them. Maybe because they rhyme. I don't know. Anyway, moving on.

Loved the last stanza too. Very well thought out poem, in my opinion! Loved it!!! :D

[Rorenzu]

the poem is so deep that i can hardly read between the lines... LOL :)