Beautiful Young Woman

A beautiful young woman

trapped in a world not meant for her

She is a product of rules & regulations

She is feeling smothered,

yet curious about what is on the other side

As she stands in her livingroom

her husband sits in his chair with a vacant look in his eyes

Sophisticated yet comtemporary looking

but the darkness that is within him tries to control her

She just can't take it anymore

She walks over to the fireplace

climbs on top of it & in her dream world

looks for a way out of this what seemingly wonderful home provides

She is wondering if she can escape from it while

her husband is ever so despondant

She stands in her heel boots & poofy blue dress he has her in

He expects her to look a certain way

playing off of her innocence

She is just a world away

she ponders what is out there

It looks dark from the inside

but really it's the unknown that is being seen

Should she or should she not take that leap

 

 

Reviews

[Calypso]

I feel like that girl. Well written.

[SarahCortland]

another great poem :)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow wonderfully written. That is a question that seems so hard to answer at a time like that! Everyone who has gone though this finds a answer to that! wonderfully written just great write! I really love this piece you have a strong mystery that only that person can answer. Thank you for sharing this.

[Praiser]

A good question, for all the bad situation that look for A way out
But when you get tired of it you will leap

[Chris38]

This was wonderfully written and in answer to the question at the end she certainly should take the leap but the unknown is scary even when you are in a horrible situation already.

[trainwreck]

This seems almost like a tragic alice in wonderland. However, it was very well-written and read wonderfully. Thank you for sharing.

[Im His Daughter]

Thanks All ;)

[Ashley]

Wow i love how you took the picture and made the poem reflect it. This is fantastic!!! 100/100

[hannajade]

interesting!!

[Gone]

There is a dark undertone of abuse to this poem. Not physical but mental and emotional abuse. The restrictions and theft of free will, reveal a level of evil within the husband! good writing.