i miss you

its something i had to write just to let him know what i exactly feel even if he wont be able to read it

here i am
drying my tears
tears which never were
truth is i miss you
i miss your smile
i miss your company
how we would text from dawn till dawn
talking about everything and nothing
i miss our late night chats and calls
how you would tell me everything
i miss how you would call my name and make it sound special
how you would give me a shoulder to lean on when the world turned against me
how you would encourage my dreams
i miss everything about you
im trying to be myself
but evrything i do reminds me of you
i know i have to be strong and build me
but truth is its not something easy
you promised me forever
you said that you would never leave
was i too stuborn
too hard to handle or you just wanted to let go
life sucks without you
I MISS YOU

Reviews

[Chris]

This one speaks on multiple levels to me... it has heart and is well organized.

[imiey]

thank you for the comments Chris

[Chris]

anytime... It was worth being heard.

[imiey]

it feels good someone appreciating your art

[J. Kell]

I love this line because it make it a modern love story "how we would text from dawn till dawn"
Great poem. It's definitely hard when we lose someone we love.I look forward to reading more of your poems.

[Heather]

this is a beautiful poem and as its based on true emotions no one can ever tell you it isnt great as as long as you believe in those words it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks. great work! :D