RIP LOVE

its about damaged emotions

here i am
picking up my broken pieces
pieces of my damaged porcelein heart
once upon a time you said forever
heres my happy ending
im sure not alone
becaue misery is my company
i know wev had our ups and downs
but through them we were able to grow even stronger
now i have to start on my own
i have to build up myself from scratch
you built me up and broke me down
love which seemed unending
is now left scratchd and damaged
choking with tears of rage and brokeness
cause i love you so
moving on is what m doing
burning all the memories of us in the past
i pretend to be tough
but truth is i am a weakline
your love was my strength
rock bottom is where i am
RIP LOVE

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Real love does in fact, leave a part of us broken when it leaves. You've expressed that very well here!

[Heather]

this is great and the harsh reality of this poem is what brings it to life and persuades you to read on and learn more. I can really see the breakdown of emotions in this poem as you have written them to be loud so loud they are almost screaming which really grabs my attention. overall this is a great start and a lovely read as it flows. welcome to writerscafe! :)