Exchange my soul

I had a bad day throughout my every day life

I thought off giving up my soul to the devil

I created a path to talk to the devil

I asked the devil for power

in exchange I will give half of my soul (half of my life) to the devil

 

Back in reality, something changed in my body

a feeling of the amount of energy crawling inside me

I told myself that I will use this power to revenge for those who bullied me

 

The power works well but not for long

power inside me later became like drugs

I was losing it

my heart was hurting really bad that one day I cough blood out

that was the day I have to returned the power to the devil

and be a normal human as everyone else

 

the day I talked to the devil again was when I was really sick

a sickness, made me feel I can see the light.

There was a miracle,

the devil refused to let me returned the power

he wanted my another half of my soul

at night, he was pulling my soul out of my body

at the very moment, I screamed

“Jesus, HELP ME!!!!!”

there was a sudden light from my bed room ceiling

it was so bright that the devil ran away

I was shucked!

 

At school, whenever I am alone, I would had feeling that the devil is pulling my soul down

the devil tried to persuade me wanted me to  have that power again

 

not for long, soon after I gain myself as a normal human

back to myself without the power of devil

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmmm how fascinating.. i loved it. Power can be dangerous when taken/borrowed.. but i like the message of this. How it was your faith that saved you. Nicely done.

[black.butterfly]

simple and nice write. :)

[chaffy]

Jesus is nice.. I liked the story, is it going to be continued?