i dont know

i dont know

A Poem by imb126

I thought u would always care, I thought u would always be there, But you lied when you said you loved me, You lied when you said you cared for me, Now i dont know who to trust, I  know who to love because you said you cared, You loved me, But when you left me the last thing i asked you was do you still feel the same and you laughed with shame and said i dont know.                ~imb126 aka mrs lady~                            

© 2010 imb126


Author's Note

imb126
hope you enjoy i dont know how to make it like a regular peom look so im sorry it looks corny

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I actually dig how it's written right now :)
It's different, but it's a good change. And it reads well.
It's sad in the end, but it's good.
You express your feelings to the reader well.
Thank you for sharing with us! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow it's good i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on March 27, 2010
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imb126
imb126

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hi my name is imani i luv to hang out wit my friends luv 2 go 2 dollar parties and my favorite sport is soccor buht my favorite 2 hobbys are writting nd modeling wen i growup i would luv to becom a wr.. more..

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