The Infant Of Dawn

 

Sitting near the fireplace casting shadows upon my face

 

Chasing fire whips scattered along stone walls with grace

 

Picturing madly figures a mixture of drunken lightning nights

 

 

Hearing twilight cracking from dawn's inner skylight                       

              

This peaceful holly tune forced darkness to consume

 

Away to the forbidden hell where hope no more pursue

 

Spirits laughed hazily with a joyful brightening sight

 

Light has conquered darkness goodness is a free right

 

To live to breath to utter words of speechless wisdom trees

 

Finally we can behold the summer spectacular breeze

 

The tides of seven seas the ocean's divine cycling waves

 

Gathering winds dancing with thunder sparkling knight

Air will release the prisoners of shameless titan's chains

 

Thus jailing tyrant's injustice mockery tools and toys beneath

Layers of mud and dust which will wear instead of golden lace

It's your choice it's your final destined scorned resident place

 Once you played with fire to burn and slay the truest souls 

 Taste forever slavery bonds connected to your filthy rotten bones

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

DAMN. This is by far one of the best poems I have read in a long time. The imagery was perfect, it was haunting and the ending was harsh but so true. The beginning made me pause but it was so unlike the middle and end. I think if you edited the very beginning a little and made it more like the rest of the poem it would be really brilliant but that's just my suggestion, it's fine just as it is. Great write,

Brette

[Iman A.elazim]

Dear strange_gurl thanks for what you said I wish always to reach
your expectations my dear

[strange_gurl]

Iman each time u post a new poem ,i feel very excited to read it ,just reading ur poems truely takes me to a different world..absolutely execptional!!!

Away to the forbidden hell where hope no more pursue



Spirits laughed hazily with a joyful brightening sight


u sure make my soul laugh xxx

[Iman A.elazim]

After these years I still have the same thoughts about the beginning as the calmness you find capturing the seconds before the dawn is born ,
the pureness of the world which forces dark powers to be paralyzed
and in rare times it conquers them
and defeat them in spite of their cruelty and strength
just like our glorious days in Egypt when from 25Th January
till Feb.11 we swept the rotten system away from their thrown
so you see goodness and purity can really be powerful tools
standing against most evil nature & biggest tyrants in the world.