In The Stillness Of Her Heart She Cries For Him

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In the freshness of spring when rebirth comes anew

Dreams of a love fading out of the blue,

shatters a broken heart

Concise retentiveness compose memories of him

Fragrant air fountains his scent

She longs to be inside his skin,

make his heart beat for her once again

 

Summer wraps his wramth around her

His flesh melts into her a longing of loss

The taste of him becomes succulent with each passing moment

Out-lines of his features accompany her dreams at night,

commemorating times spent in his arms

 

Autumn replay the changes in her life

Each falling leaf weaves a canopy of him,

shrewding her with what once was now is gone

The breath inside her canot blow it away

 

Winter crisp days freeze his touch upon her skin,

igniting the dying fire in her cold heart

With each passing season her love for him deepens,

while his fades away

In the stillness of her heart she cries for him

She longs to be inside his skin,

make his heart beat for her once again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

a love lost... the yearn I can FEEL!! you took me there sis... to memories of a love that still burns in my soul... BRILLIANT write as always!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

You have a way with words in all your work which I enjoy to read and as I have said before poetry is a work of art and this one is no exception.
Excellent write.

[Dream Weaver]

Seasons change as does the longing for memories
of a special love from the past. Nicely put ...

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

wonderful analogies!

[eglantine]

"fountains his scent" beautiful and singular. I like the use of the seasons and phasing through the stages of grief (not of death but of loss). Don't think I'd repeat the last line...

[BlueDreams]

Reminiscing the gone moments and to crave to get back merely kills .. Very true write .. :-)

[Brad]

now that was just intoxicating! whew

[Wolf's Dark Song]

The awful pain of loosing someone you love. A very tragic ending to a love story. Superb writing here.

[Tina Kline]

Very creative, beautiful and romantic.