In The Stillness Of Her Heart She Cries For Him

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In the freshness of spring when rebirth comes anew

Dreams of a love fading out of the blue,

shatters a broken heart

Concise retentiveness compose memories of him

Fragrant air fountains his scent

She longs to be inside his skin,

make his heart beat for her once again

 

Summer wraps his wramth around her

His flesh melts into her a longing of loss

The taste of him becomes succulent with each passing moment

Out-lines of his features accompany her dreams at night,

commemorating times spent in his arms

 

Autumn replay the changes in her life

Each falling leaf weaves a canopy of him,

shrewding her with what once was now is gone

The breath inside her canot blow it away

 

Winter crisp days freeze his touch upon her skin,

igniting the dying fire in her cold heart

With each passing season her love for him deepens,

while his fades away

In the stillness of her heart she cries for him

She longs to be inside his skin,

make his heart beat for her once again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I think you have a fluid spectrum of language
that always provokes an outburst from me,
damn this is THE BEST.
The tentative sensuality tainted with an aroma
of intrigue compells the reader to dig deep.
Always beneath the naked girl and the panting
male, I find tenderness and loving caring.
Always the best.

-----Eagle Cruagh

[Eric Cox]

Beautifully penned poem of longing for a lost love.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Winter crisp days freeze his touch upon her skin.....love this line, beautiful piece.

[Loner]

Beautiful poem ...

[Valentine]

Very well writen and very emotional..I think sometimes we all have someone that got away that we dream about for years..I know I do..Love Kathie

[Maya Storm]

This is what I think... It is VERY SENSUAL!!!

I like the seasonal changes, and having the feelings of love and lost staying exactly the same. The feeling transcends all.

Fav Lines: 'She longs to be inside his skin,' ...'shrewding her with what once was now is gone'

[Sami Khalil]

Rebirth of love and dreams. well written.

[Cherrie Palmer]

you are the Queen of romance, the reader longs for the couple to rekindle their love

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great job..!!!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautifully written :)