Peace Dances Upon Her Soul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She wonders is there life out there of peace and freedom

Trapped in a world of artificial love she dreams of ballet

Musical tranquility infuses sweet melody into a broken heart

When she wears her tutu it's her shield against the pain

She longs to immerse herself forever in the grace of dancing

 

Tears carpet the floor where her feet touches

Her soul is tailor-made for strength as she soars

through the air

Indignity becomes invisible as life takes on

an invitation to living

Indirection changes course to a precise path

 

Harmony fits her contour like a second skin

A smile lights her aura

The feel of freedom intwined with her silhouette

dances to the melody as peace covers her soul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

let freedom whisper across the heavens...and we can see...alas we can see
dance as well allows us to free our spirit and our soul
watching is as uplifting as doing
I loved the honesty....the experience... the rapture
thanks for sharing
allen

[Mauricio Montoya]

The life of a dancer and its draw backs I could see where there could no peace or freedom.
Excellent write.

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is very beautiful and crafted well.

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a good piece of writing, very visual ( I could have seen the picture without the picture, the words were fine enough ), what I like is the adherence to the theme, and the careful and thoughtful writing, good work.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Lovely poem. To be doing what one loves best seems to transcend everything!

[Raven Starhawk]

I wish peace would dance upon my soul. It might relieve some of this pain. But your poem is remarkable. I love it. It gives me a sense of...I am sure how to word it but anyway I liked it.

[Star Wolf]

A touch of sadness in this but we all do try to shield ourselves from pain with something. Her's at least, is healthy. This is really good writing. I really enjoyed this.

[Tina Kline]

A wonderful write. If we have something we love it helps to get through life's pains.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

These beautiful words paint a pretty little image in my mind. Great poem.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sweet.. Great write