In The Slumber Of Dreams Is Her Love

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tears emcompass a pallid face

Memories of amorous love cry out in the

slumber of dreams

Hands out stretch only to grasp thin air

Lost inside herself she searchs for him

 

Moonlight visions summon the love she holds

A garrote constrains her soul,

suffocating the cup of comfort once felt

Symbols of their love paves the way to him

 

Visual modality traverses her deeper into

the abyssal darkness

Perceptual desire strengthens sleep

Words spoken long ago vibrates the

stillness of slumber

Time with him has expired

 

The need for him detonates a bittersweet moment

Pain seethes her cleaveage as her eyes flutter open

A shudder of weakness contorts her face

If only she would die before she wakes

In the slumber of dreams she would be

cushion in his love forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

This is so beautifully written. I'm certainly admireing your poetry lately with the sensual, peaceful imagery throughout your writes like a dream. Don't stop, keep it up. Nicely done.

[Cassie Fraga]

now this has got to be the best piece I have read from you sis!!! this was a beautiful heartfelt write and I appreciate the depth in it... very well penned indeed!!
**tips my lyrcal wand to you**

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

excellent use of vocab terms!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Crushing to the point where we lend to the writing, a well penned piece.

[Raven Starhawk]

Though I have read this at least twice I am stalled. The words...again I use "words" though it seems to be more that than. I find meaning here where I can knit myself into and explore. I find beauty and even a touch of...sadness? pain? Well anyway it is expressed wonderfully.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very nice! Once again, your imagery is spot-on. Your words paint a vivid scene in my mind.