In The Slumber Of Dreams Is Her Love

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tears emcompass a pallid face

Memories of amorous love cry out in the

slumber of dreams

Hands out stretch only to grasp thin air

Lost inside herself she searchs for him

 

Moonlight visions summon the love she holds

A garrote constrains her soul,

suffocating the cup of comfort once felt

Symbols of their love paves the way to him

 

Visual modality traverses her deeper into

the abyssal darkness

Perceptual desire strengthens sleep

Words spoken long ago vibrates the

stillness of slumber

Time with him has expired

 

The need for him detonates a bittersweet moment

Pain seethes her cleaveage as her eyes flutter open

A shudder of weakness contorts her face

If only she would die before she wakes

In the slumber of dreams she would be

cushion in his love forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Nicely done. Very romantic and full of longing, sounds like what we go through at least once or perhaps twice in our lifetimes.

[Star Wolf]

A very sad and tragic tale, beautiful in its pain and romance. Excellent writing.

[WindSong]

It's dreamy and quite beautiful! I loved reading it!

[Tina Kline]

Fabulous poem, very vivid and tragic.

[Enigma]

A heart-wrenching write. The loss of love can be so difficult to snap out of sometimes. You penned the emotion well. Keep up the good work. :)

[Brad]

you haven't lost your touch with romantacism...still get that deep starry eyed sigh after reading you

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is beautiful, I really love this piece.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Amazing strength in your poetry...stunning once again !!

[?]

Beautiful...just beautiful...enchanting
Imagery is wonderful...I have missed reading yours and your sister work

[Ruth]

Really makes the reader float through it all....stunning, as always love! xoxo