In The Slumber Of Dreams Is Her Love

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tears emcompass a pallid face

Memories of amorous love cry out in the

slumber of dreams

Hands out stretch only to grasp thin air

Lost inside herself she searchs for him

 

Moonlight visions summon the love she holds

A garrote constrains her soul,

suffocating the cup of comfort once felt

Symbols of their love paves the way to him

 

Visual modality traverses her deeper into

the abyssal darkness

Perceptual desire strengthens sleep

Words spoken long ago vibrates the

stillness of slumber

Time with him has expired

 

The need for him detonates a bittersweet moment

Pain seethes her cleaveage as her eyes flutter open

A shudder of weakness contorts her face

If only she would die before she wakes

In the slumber of dreams she would be

cushion in his love forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is a very great poem. This girls Pain is so evident that it jumps out at you like a green thumb. I love it.

[Eric Cox]

Hauntingly sad. So well penned, a beautiful write of when dreams are in slumber.

[Loner]

Really thought provoking ...

[Poetic Beauty]

These are stunning word that seep into the soul and allow the reader to feel the depth of pain

[Rajwa]

Simply Amazing !!

[Norma M Sutton]

Strong imagery. Direct and to the point. The last lines sum it up well. I like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. In dreams we can find love and victories. I like the story and how you led me into sadness and into dreams. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

How the heart longs for the fulfillment of dreams, and none more so than those of two hearts melting into one... This is powerfully bittersweet in beauty and near haunting in desire...

[WinterIce<3]

A very sad and tragic tale, but very romantic and pain an excellent writing :D

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautifully sad, penned wonderfully!