Feasting On Springs Bounty

 

Miniscule caterpillar munching on a green leaf,

yearns to sip succulent nectar from seasonal bounty

Spins a cocoon, and falls asleep

When he awakes colorful delicate wings apparel his back

He takes fight, lands on a budding rose to taste sweet Spring

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something refreshing!

Reviews

[Jed Sabffle]

you composed the idea very well even though its short..
Yeah, it is very refreshing to think about the wonders of nature! :D
great poem :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice and to the point!

[Cassie Fraga]

very refreshing!!! great write my friend, it flowed so easy!!!

[Tina Kline]

I like this. A very enjoyable poem. I've always enjoyed caterpillars and in what still seems like magic how they become something so vastly different, a butterfly!

[jennifer little]

nice job