Feasting On Springs Bounty

 

Miniscule caterpillar munching on a green leaf,

yearns to sip succulent nectar from seasonal bounty

Spins a cocoon, and falls asleep

When he awakes colorful delicate wings apparel his back

He takes fight, lands on a budding rose to taste sweet Spring

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something refreshing!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Spring will be here soon. I can't wait. I like the description and the positive ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

refreshing indeed...sometimes those simplistic poems are the most expressive...

[Star Wolf]

This is really nice writing. Spring is life and the caterpillar emerging from the cocoon as a butterfly shows how powerful life is.

[WhiteWillow]

A welcoming poem, full of hope and promise.

One small thing...I believe its spelled cocoon. Aside from this small typo, a beautiful moment in nature.

[Ruth]

And that is so refreshing indeed love! I am in love this piece :) xoxo

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Enjoyable read....and yeah sure is refreshing :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, short and to the point, well done, good read.

[?]

Indeed refreshing...just like Spring
Such a sweet beautiful piece. Enjoyed this

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful. Metamorphosis has always fascinated me. The changing of one thing into another. We as humans do this internally all the time. We are always changing with the movements of our life and the new lessons we learn.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this makes me wish I was a caterpillar that could change into something so beautiful!