Feasting On Springs Bounty

 

Miniscule caterpillar munching on a green leaf,

yearns to sip succulent nectar from seasonal bounty

Spins a cocoon, and falls asleep

When he awakes colorful delicate wings apparel his back

He takes fight, lands on a budding rose to taste sweet Spring

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something refreshing!

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

This is such an enjoyable poem, smooth and sweet to the visions. Thanks for the ride.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you so much!

[Loner]

Great poetry and expression as well.....

[Rajwa]

Refreshing ..

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Reminds me of a memory just a few days ago, when all the butterflies finally awoke and millions of them were flying everywhere. Nicely done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

refreshing it is, nice work.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sweet

[Jeremy Baker]

Great use of alliteration here, as well as a lovely image of nature.

[Sleepless]

it is refrshing in fact i can just imagien the whole scene this poem is fantiastic :P

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very enchanting and beautiful perfect for the coming spring. I think you did a great job on this poem. Love the image of the hungry caterpillar waking as a butterfly. Life does go on!