Love Splashes Upon Hearts With Tides Of Emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love enlightens two people mesmerized within each other. Emotions cascade upon flesh.

Warmth of their breath sings love.

Words not spoken are engraved in hearts.

Hands mold a magical romance, sends them to

an enchanted place of bliss.

 

Refreshing passion quilts them in silken grace.

Tears moisten eye-lids in a rainbow of amazement.

Residue of desire celebrates on entwined bodies.

Another moment melts into the depth of their silhoutte. Love rests on the pillow of souls.

 

The veil of afterglow covers them gently.

Pictures of love that taste like sweet red wine

intoxicate satisfied minds. In a peaceful state of

fulfillment love splashes upon hearts with tides of emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Struggled with this piece! Be honst and tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

You wrap this piece up so beautifully in the last stanza--really lovely!

[William Teague]

Your write commands the reader to fall in love with you!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Poised and darling, it seems like you want to write more but found it complete, good read.

[?]

Eloquent..beautiful..filled with romance
Love rests on the pillow of souls.
In a peaceful state of fullfillment love splashes upon hearts with tide of emotions

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is a beautiful piece and the picture goes with this so well.

[Ruth]

I think its worked with elegance and stamina! To keep love fresh and alive in a poem one has to work at the imagery and you do so with flare and passion xoxo

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

you pulled it off!

i enjoy this poem's gentle nature

[from İçel]

This poem brought me in, I like it, but I was almost distracted on how descriptive it is. This poem is describing something, indeed a very beautiful something. I think it may flesh out more, if you built up who the givers and receivers of admiration were. Beautifully descriptive, but that would be my only critique. That and maybe so, maybe not, but some rhyme scheme might add nice cadence. Thanks for sharing...

[Wolf's Dark Song]

The positive, beautiful side of love. It's what we all long for. I like this.

[Tina Kline]

This is very creatively written, full of passion and romance. The shared love and tenderness really pulls the reader in. Excellent writing!