Love Splashes Upon Hearts With Tides Of Emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love enlightens two people mesmerized within each other. Emotions cascade upon flesh.

Warmth of their breath sings love.

Words not spoken are engraved in hearts.

Hands mold a magical romance, sends them to

an enchanted place of bliss.

 

Refreshing passion quilts them in silken grace.

Tears moisten eye-lids in a rainbow of amazement.

Residue of desire celebrates on entwined bodies.

Another moment melts into the depth of their silhoutte. Love rests on the pillow of souls.

 

The veil of afterglow covers them gently.

Pictures of love that taste like sweet red wine

intoxicate satisfied minds. In a peaceful state of

fulfillment love splashes upon hearts with tides of emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Struggled with this piece! Be honst and tell me what you think!

Reviews

[MandaBear]

I liked it a lot :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautifully romantic :)

[Warren L.G De Mills]

A love poem that doesn't sound too cliche. Good job! that alone earns you points in my books. I like your use of metaphors "Tides of emotion" "veil of after-glow". I enjoyed reading this.
By the way. spelling error in line 9 "etwined" should be "eNtwined"

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a good poem, that could also be adapted to a piece of interesting prose.
Lots of good imagery.(maybe a typo,pitures instead of pictures,tide instead of tides).Good work, nice write.

[hmm]

Such a wonderful write here, Beuatiful piece!

[Brad]

i am surprised at your admitted struggles with this genre...you've a gift to express your heart and you delve deep into the romantic pool that one gets lost in the emotion of your writes.

[Coyote Poetry]

A good vision create by the excellent poem. Description gave life to the words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cassie Fraga]

BEAUTIFUL!!! so easy with emotion... you expressed well here!! great job!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the love in this poem...magnificent :D