Love Splashes Upon Hearts With Tides Of Emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love enlightens two people mesmerized within each other. Emotions cascade upon flesh.

Warmth of their breath sings love.

Words not spoken are engraved in hearts.

Hands mold a magical romance, sends them to

an enchanted place of bliss.

 

Refreshing passion quilts them in silken grace.

Tears moisten eye-lids in a rainbow of amazement.

Residue of desire celebrates on entwined bodies.

Another moment melts into the depth of their silhoutte. Love rests on the pillow of souls.

 

The veil of afterglow covers them gently.

Pictures of love that taste like sweet red wine

intoxicate satisfied minds. In a peaceful state of

fulfillment love splashes upon hearts with tides of emotions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Struggled with this piece! Be honst and tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Loner]

Awesome write...

[Sami Khalil]

Fountain of love and romance.

[Laura Maidah]

"Afterglow" is one word, btw. And "fulfillment" has an extra "l" in your version. It's very memorable. Great. Has marvelous lucidity and depth. Very plausible, yet picturesque. This is a very right-now kind of poem. Every tried to publish? You are someone to watch out for.

[Rajwa]

I Loved This Peace ..

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is art and I think you've done a great job bringing this piece together.

[R J Askew]

I like the 'quilts them' dab as it is fresh and charming.

[Jeremy Baker]

The lovely images and the picture made me think of that old movie, The Blue Lagoon. Very sweet.

[Sleepless]

aaaaaaaw!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) lol awesome imagery ! :) love it :P

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

If an Alien Race came down from outer space....this poem would explain in exact detail what it means for us to love. Beautiful work.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You may have struggled but it certainly does not show.
This one line (among others) is amazing :
"Tears moisten eye-lids in a rainbow of amazement."
So lovely and loving.

Chloe