Sins Of The Night Beckons

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love simmers in a broken heart,

 love that goes unnoticed

A pimp with no emotional existence

Money is all he lust after

He sends her into the arms of others

 

She weeps tears of longing,

vocalizes her feelings

Eyes of oppression scold her

Worthless w***e she is

Effluent words sting like rain

 

Halo of shame around silken hair

Remorse dilutes the pain

Artificial happiness sheilds sadness

Repentances fades away

 

Tentative smile plays his lips

She turns to walk away

Sins of the night beckons

In the arms of others she takes,

while her love wastes away

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[UnderCompulsion]

It has strong emotions.Poem describes this picture perfectly!Great job! :)

[Jeremy Baker]

The inevitability that she will return is saddening and pitiful. You evoke such strong emotional responses with your stellar descriptions!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost funny to the point of satire, it leaves me with a great sense of the ability in all of us, well done, good read.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I really enjoyed reading the story in the poem. I like this a lot, great job.

[Tina Kline]

This is REALLY good! I love how you told the tale in this. Very enjoyable read!

[BlueDreams]

Really Heart moving piece :-)

[Cassie Fraga]

a beautiful sad poetic piece.... very strong in detail!! Nice work!!!

[WhiteWillow]

A lovely piece, and a nice interpretation of the picture. I love seeing the various styles and stories that stem from the same work of art. Well done!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is so heart warming. I am such a fan of your work!