Sins Of The Night Beckons

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love simmers in a broken heart,

 love that goes unnoticed

A pimp with no emotional existence

Money is all he lust after

He sends her into the arms of others

 

She weeps tears of longing,

vocalizes her feelings

Eyes of oppression scold her

Worthless w***e she is

Effluent words sting like rain

 

Halo of shame around silken hair

Remorse dilutes the pain

Artificial happiness sheilds sadness

Repentances fades away

 

Tentative smile plays his lips

She turns to walk away

Sins of the night beckons

In the arms of others she takes,

while her love wastes away

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Loner]

True image of cheating ....... great write thanks for sharing with us.

[Rajwa]

He Deserves To Be Cheated..

[Sleepless]

its awesoem the picture was perfect imaigin the women and the men i imagined everything nice poem !:)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A shameful and yet unfortunate lifestyle for some. You captured this wonderfully. Nicely done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work you've done a great job in bringing this together what more can I say.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is done well. It.is a different take than what I see. It amazes me at how we all come up with unique ideas over the same artwork or words

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Indeed she yearns for true love but into the arms of others she goes, sad lass. I feel sorry for her. You painted a great image of a very real situation many face today. I enjoyed the read.

[Star Wolf]

Very good job! The tale and picture go together perfectly.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

your explain the picture pretty well

nice one