Wandering Through Blissful Peace

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moving through the woods where foot prints are molded in the worn path nature breathes. Measurable charm becomes magical. Winds gently massage away stress, blowing the cob webs of worry free.

 

A sense of awe becomes visible with each step. Flawless perfection was created by the master's artful hand. Experience of enjoyment abounds. In the stillness of the day life slows down in the wooded sanctuary.

 

Exquisite sounds can be heard from nature's stero, adding grandeur to the scene. A mysterious presence of comfort filters in the oasis of solitude, filling a void with restful nourishment. wandering through blissful peace sends cleansing  droplets of meditation.

 

 

Lingering sunlight spills through the shrouded canopy of trees. Glorious rustic  leafs delicate as a feather rustle in the soft breeze. The earth rich in its handiwork brings forth beauty. Angelic sky barren of clouds whisper serenity.

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Loner]

A real philosophical write i must say......
Nice job ........

[Art Sun]

nice work...those thoughts are like being there...

[Mauricio Montoya]

This piece brings peace to my soul.
Excellent write

[Valentine]

This painting tells it all, the scenes our Maker paints are the best..nicely told..Kathie

[Susan]

This poem matches the title very nicely.
I also like the sense of imagery you have.
I like that you vary in word choice- meaning your vocabulary can range from simple to "bigger" words, but at the same time flows well and is understandable!

The only thing, and this is only an opinion of mine, is that the poem ended a bit too abruptly.
In otherwords, the last sentence of this poem isn't the best choice for an end. It is not much of a deal, I just thought if you ended the poem with a line that is more fit for an end it would be better.


Nice work,
Susan
Happy writing!

[WindSong]

Soft and serene imagery of a magical and mystifying place to dream forever in. Beautiful poem!

WindSong

[Wolf's Dark Song]

You describe a place I would dearly love to be right now! This is spectacular!

[Tina Kline]

What a beautiful walk through nature you describe. This is stunning!

What a beautiful walk through your words, goosebumps, I totally love this, you're so close to nature, and bring it out beautifully. The last word says it all for me, cause this is perfect, the true feeling of nature, should be serene~ awesome!