Afraid Beyond The Door

For the Creative Poetry Group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eyes peek through the peek hole of yearning

Cosmos taunts her

Illusion of the mind, or real?

Perspiration pools moisture of regret

 

Crepitate hissing sends sensation of frission

Satire voices inside her mind ridicule

Throat terminates impending screams

Shallow breathing submerges her deeper

into the icey grip of fear

 

Delicate figure cowers in a corner

Spasmodic body cringes at each sound

Sweet nectar looses its calming effect

Habitual astral projection journeys

her to a hypnotic state

 

The way to freedom stays locked

Combination lost in a phobia's brain

Nightmares of ghostly shadows whisper you are mine

Therefore she is afraid of what is beyond the door

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!
words we had to use is in my tag box!

Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

Your poem is so well written and the mystery makes it just perfect!
In an analogy, I think that we always are afraid what his behind "that door".
Perfect combination of "dream" and "reality".
((((hugs)))
*Mary*

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I loved this. It makes me think of the mystery of when we decide to peer within a keyhole, given the impression by your first stance that sometimes we cant even expect what might be seen. Whether we will like what we see or given the darkness of a mind maybe something that we should not see and yet we fear. Nicely done.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Ah! These words are beautifully chosen, powerful, and convincing...they toy with my mind! Amazing write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I have heard of people who spend their lives afraid to even go outside, this certainly feels like a glimpse into the mind of one.

[Mauricio Montoya]

love how this piece comes together the words just blend right in.
Excellent write.

[Kesav Easwaran]

The selective use of powerful words add more impact to the poem theme...a nice presentation of fear psychosis...well written poem indeed

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

What an amazing write....so love how you created this poem...perfection!!!

[BlueDreams]

Freaky amazing.... Whoa what a write!!! unstopping,,,,,

[Raven Starhawk]

Just amazingly written. I wish I had more to say but as I read I am washed away by the unrelenting sea of poetic bliss. Hope that made sense what I just typed. I have a duh moment playing with my brain but this really was good.