Afraid Beyond The Door

For the Creative Poetry Group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eyes peek through the peek hole of yearning

Cosmos taunts her

Illusion of the mind, or real?

Perspiration pools moisture of regret

 

Crepitate hissing sends sensation of frission

Satire voices inside her mind ridicule

Throat terminates impending screams

Shallow breathing submerges her deeper

into the icey grip of fear

 

Delicate figure cowers in a corner

Spasmodic body cringes at each sound

Sweet nectar looses its calming effect

Habitual astral projection journeys

her to a hypnotic state

 

The way to freedom stays locked

Combination lost in a phobia's brain

Nightmares of ghostly shadows whisper you are mine

Therefore she is afraid of what is beyond the door

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!
words we had to use is in my tag box!

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

last stanza brings everything together...
nice!

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Oh this gave me shivers! Awesome!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is amazing! Great write!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good show...

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a sense of fear here... those lingering shadows in the mind that haunt and move in our anxiety... so powerful...

[Valentine]

Some typos but all right..she needs a burgular alarm system !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Valentine

[Star Wolf]

Awesome. The psychological fear is chilling in this.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very impressive writing. I really felt the fear in your words. Dark and chilling. Great job!

[?]

Very well written
Fear is a very powerful thing and you have penned it wonderfully in this piece.
Very gripping
I have a few fears myself, dont we all? lol
Powerful piece

[TamiViolet]

Fear of taking chances perhaps? Because that would mean confronting the possibility of rejection... I'm not certain, but that was my initial thought after having read this mysterious piece.... Particularly strong was word choice which created fear....sweat...questions without answers... I think there are no answers sometimes, and we just have to ride out each day....without expectation...and see what happens.... I enjoyed this one, my friend...