Afraid Beyond The Door

For the Creative Poetry Group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eyes peek through the peek hole of yearning

Cosmos taunts her

Illusion of the mind, or real?

Perspiration pools moisture of regret

 

Crepitate hissing sends sensation of frission

Satire voices inside her mind ridicule

Throat terminates impending screams

Shallow breathing submerges her deeper

into the icey grip of fear

 

Delicate figure cowers in a corner

Spasmodic body cringes at each sound

Sweet nectar looses its calming effect

Habitual astral projection journeys

her to a hypnotic state

 

The way to freedom stays locked

Combination lost in a phobia's brain

Nightmares of ghostly shadows whisper you are mine

Therefore she is afraid of what is beyond the door

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!
words we had to use is in my tag box!

Reviews

[Enid Blake]

I'm quite worried about what's beyond the door now! Beautiful and chilling at the same time :)

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed indeed.....

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Open the door to questions and desires. Fear of mistake can block us from success and learning. I like the feel and the emotion of this poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[JRB]

Eyes peek through the peek hole of yearning Cosmos taunts her iIllusion of the mind, or real, Perspiration pools moisture of regret
a great thought of being ,, nice write,, keep up the writes i enjoyed the read

[WhiteWillow]

Wonderful writing! I have to admit, I had to look up the meaning of 'crepitate.' Thank you for teaching me something new today! Beautiful piece, loved it.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

With your words...I'm almost afraid of what's behind the door....good job!

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

Wonderfully written and poetically beautiful!!! Great job indeed!!!!

[Sarah]

It is a little sad but very nice.
XD

What a beautiful translation of the parallel event, of consciousness and the unconscious. Fear and power balance. Very creative writing. Beautiful!!!

[Poetic Beauty]

One word sums up the idea of this piece...ANXIETY. I have anxiety and it makes me feel like. I have learned to control it over the years with deep breathing.