Remnants Of Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

REMEMBER ME WHEN.......

 

 

The lemonade sun sparkles its mellon rays

Summer lawns luxuriant with green

Sky coloured blue

Lily-White clouds be adrift

Feathery breeze blows in sweet dreams of love,

we thought would never fade

 

Autumn kisses the earth

Leaves in varicolor array the trees

Soft whispering wind cause them to dance to the ground

The sun sets in a rainbow of vibrant shades

 

Snow embraces the landscape in a wintery bliss

Crisp air mingles with warm breath

Crackling fire burns to ember in a fireplace

Body grows cold, i'm not there to cuddle

Crying wind echos a lost love

 

Spring freshens up nature

Flowers are at their prime

Efforescence buds pop open like umbrellas on a rainy day

Birds whistle a romantic love song

 

Darkness seeks the night

Brilliant colors wither to black

Pregnant moon spills relucent light

Remnants of me won't let you sleep,

that's when you remember the best is in the past

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[trainwreck]

interesting phrasing. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great job.

[DLC]

Well versed ... one AWESOME pen!

[Shellie]

its excellent- very well done x

[?]

WOW, and amazing piece.
Awesome imagery, seasons, colors....
I trully enjoyed this one

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Amazing poem and so true, the past always looks better than it really was the further we move away from it and the further we have to look back.

[Star Wolf]

Lots of beauty in this overcast with the dark of sadness. I think this is one awesome write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Glorious use of words...vocabulary used to portray the imagery...stunning :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Bittersweet... for the past is just a taste of the glorious beauty that fades as time goes by. This is written Beautifully! I love the array of colors you depicted, to give life to this poem. Nicely done!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The beauty of of mother nature in every mood is present.
I love the way you used the seasons and colors. Very creative.