Remnants Of Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

REMEMBER ME WHEN.......

 

 

The lemonade sun sparkles its mellon rays

Summer lawns luxuriant with green

Sky coloured blue

Lily-White clouds be adrift

Feathery breeze blows in sweet dreams of love,

we thought would never fade

 

Autumn kisses the earth

Leaves in varicolor array the trees

Soft whispering wind cause them to dance to the ground

The sun sets in a rainbow of vibrant shades

 

Snow embraces the landscape in a wintery bliss

Crisp air mingles with warm breath

Crackling fire burns to ember in a fireplace

Body grows cold, i'm not there to cuddle

Crying wind echos a lost love

 

Spring freshens up nature

Flowers are at their prime

Efforescence buds pop open like umbrellas on a rainy day

Birds whistle a romantic love song

 

Darkness seeks the night

Brilliant colors wither to black

Pregnant moon spills relucent light

Remnants of me won't let you sleep,

that's when you remember the best is in the past

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

This is so INTENSE! very well done. Looking deep into your inner self makes world poetry. Because you're a jem! delightful, yes... that's it.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is amazing! My most favorite line is the last one. that's when you remember the best is in the past.

[realmwriter]

Very beautiful with a sad undertone. I like it.

[J.P. Bristow]

this is delicious and lovely....

[Bridget Murphy]

I love this poem i twas so ful of life!!!:)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I love this, wow. Beautiful! I can't say much else! XD

[Jasmine Thousand]

It's beautiful! I like the lemonade-melon phrase, it reminds me of summer.
One question, is the narrator dead?
~Jasmine Thousand~

[Vertigoingnowhere]

Wow this is really good i love this good job! mind takin a look at some of my work? thanks :)))

[Michael of Gilead]

Bittersweet is the word....well done.

Nitpick, "want let you sleep" did you mean won't? or "want to let you sleep"

[TamiViolet]

This work is quite beautiful. The bittersweet nostalgia of yesterday....in all her brilliant seasons. Your piece touched me, and it will be included among my favs. to be read again and again. You do an exquisite job of creating the perfect image in each stanza. A verse soft and caressing...