Remnants Of Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

REMEMBER ME WHEN.......

 

 

The lemonade sun sparkles its mellon rays

Summer lawns luxuriant with green

Sky coloured blue

Lily-White clouds be adrift

Feathery breeze blows in sweet dreams of love,

we thought would never fade

 

Autumn kisses the earth

Leaves in varicolor array the trees

Soft whispering wind cause them to dance to the ground

The sun sets in a rainbow of vibrant shades

 

Snow embraces the landscape in a wintery bliss

Crisp air mingles with warm breath

Crackling fire burns to ember in a fireplace

Body grows cold, i'm not there to cuddle

Crying wind echos a lost love

 

Spring freshens up nature

Flowers are at their prime

Efforescence buds pop open like umbrellas on a rainy day

Birds whistle a romantic love song

 

Darkness seeks the night

Brilliant colors wither to black

Pregnant moon spills relucent light

Remnants of me won't let you sleep,

that's when you remember the best is in the past

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

Brilliant, vivid imagery. I love your work. Thank you.

[Bette]

crisp write. i love your use of seasons and the fact that dark brought the memories i think all thinking is done better in the dark.

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Very colorful, very vivid. I really like this writing. So cool!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully written stunning piece of the seasons. Brilliant write.

[Kim's Poems]

I really like this write, thought it was amazing and beuatiful. Wonderful write.

[InkSlinger]

Always enjoy reading your work! Love the imagery!! Another great piece!

[WindSong]

Beautiful imagery and presentation! I love this poem about the seasons and how you feel in them one by one. Nature poems are my favorite to read and to write. An amazing poem to embrace!

WindSong

[TPK Stories]

Beautiful...I'm liking poetry more n more....

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poetry. The description was amazing. Took me to many good place with your words. I enjoyed the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote