She Will Go On Wishing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She gazes upon dancing stars

Melancholy eyes wish for him

A heart yearns to be in his

embraceable love

Days where she felt full,

but now empty

 

Each night she is lured to the sky

Head tilts back

Eyes closed

Mouth whispers wishes of hope

 

She watches the stars shimmer across

the canopy sky

Wonders if he is under the same stary night, or is he miles away making a wish for her this night?

 

He has moved on

Where she does not know

Took her heart as a souvenir

Left his memories behind

 

As dusk turns to day,

another sleepless night fades

A smile fakes her lips

Pretends the pain is gone

life is okay, but in reality she

waits for darkness to magically reappear

so she can go on wishing for him

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[InkSlinger]

I've enjoyed watching your writing mature..
Love takes what it wants, and leaves the shattered pieces to the wayside..
Beautifully penned!!

This is pure romance, you write. The separating aspects, the longing, the whole picture, the beautiful elusiveness, and your ink flows, across the screen, I totally enjoyed your write. Wonderful! xx

[Diane]

I felt my head tipping back and wanting the same thing. Not only am I wishing, I'm asking for a special delivery ;)

[Cherrie Palmer]

deep thoughts of a heavy heart - very moving

[Art Sun]

nice poem...love is a crazy emotion, especially when it leaves and holds one within a dream...wishing

[Star Wolf]

What heartache in your words here.

[Ladysue]

beautifully written..

[Tina Kline]

An outstanding poem. It shows how powerful love can be, how wonderful it can feel and the pain of its absence. Great job!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I love the poem but my best one was the last paragraph. It's absolutly beautiful and I really enjoyed it. Good work!

[Black Swan Poetry]

As dusk turns to day,
another sleepless night fades... Nice line