Ain't No More Loving You Baby

Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

                        

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fools gold words that mean nothing

Mischievous delight frames your features

Fool me once

Fool me twice

But never again

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Cata Combs of my heart hold many chambers

Pain, anger and remorse step over the

thresh-old, taking up resident

Uncloaking of your personality opens blinded eyes

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Resentiment smothers my air

Estuary of tears flow into the rising tide

A journey of relinquish she takes

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Uncanny life is ahead

Reciprocate feelings swing back and forth

Perspire drips with fear

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Sensual voluptuous cause me to pause

Temptation over rides my thoughts

Your superstitious ways forge me on

Ain't no more loving you baby

 

Heart constricts

A stray tear slids down cheek

Eyes watch you walk out

Words fill my mouth

I'll always love you baby

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

For the creative poetry group, words are in my tag box i had to use!

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You truly captured the very nature of love and how it shares its border with that other emotion. Every line was a fiery blast. You nearly melted my face off!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is amazing and the picture goes with this just perfect!

[roy mccarthy]

awesome poem,
almost sounds like it could be a blues song!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fabulous..!!!!!

[Zachary_James]

This is AMAZING you described it perfectly loved every line of it. Great work!

[Loner]

I am speechless !
awesome emotional punches, excellent flow ..... loved it...

[Poetic Beauty]

There are times when we know the love is gone. What was once there has faded beyond repair. You have described those moments in this poem with great feeling.

[Jeremy Baker]

I think you've captured this sensation all too well. Great write!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Wow!
I liked every single stanza in this poem!
:)

[Star Wolf]

The ending of a relationship is always so deeply painful. An really good write here.