Universal Affairs

For the Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

From the day we were born on this abode,

what we call the world, our home

was made of different compartments

           LOVE

                HATERED

                           WAR

                                PEACE

 

 

Life became a revolving circle of twist and turns

                    LEFT

                         RIGHT

                              STRAIGHT AHEAD

           DEAD END

Which way is the right way to travel?

 

Hatered spreads like wild fire,

burning up peace

Anger is the power of retention

Forgiveness is restrained,

pride steps in,

washes away any hope of amendments

 

Deception falls into succession with hatered and anger,

Each one ranks high

Inflicts acute pain

Ominous people cause ghastly effect

 

A world of sinister lives shadows the good

Love is choked by repugnant people that has

no concept of peace and happiness,

war is their glory

 

Meticulous caution does nothing to bring safety

Thieves and murders haunt everyday lives

Religion is remonstrated

People say God Does not exist

Eyes need to become transparent

See the world that he created,

resuscitate it to the way he wanted it to be with

              LOVE

                   HAPPINESS

                                KINDNESS

       PEACE

 

 

 

 

                         

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For the creative poetry group! Words I had to use is in my tag box!

What do you think?

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

There is a lot of truth in the words you have dripped upon this paper. This is well thought out and well penned. We all should be a little kinder and nicer to each other for we all bleed red.

[Audrey Howitt]

Lovely write! The form works well too. You have a typo or two in it--Lovely job!

[Krystal Nicole]

I loved it!! such a beautiful write!!! I absolutely thought the arrangement was awesome!! I especially loved the last line. It kindof makes you wonder, When God looks down at what the world has become, does he like what he sees?

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a crystal clear observation of the world.
Wise and true.