Universal Affairs

For the Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

From the day we were born on this abode,

what we call the world, our home

was made of different compartments

           LOVE

                HATERED

                           WAR

                                PEACE

 

 

Life became a revolving circle of twist and turns

                    LEFT

                         RIGHT

                              STRAIGHT AHEAD

           DEAD END

Which way is the right way to travel?

 

Hatered spreads like wild fire,

burning up peace

Anger is the power of retention

Forgiveness is restrained,

pride steps in,

washes away any hope of amendments

 

Deception falls into succession with hatered and anger,

Each one ranks high

Inflicts acute pain

Ominous people cause ghastly effect

 

A world of sinister lives shadows the good

Love is choked by repugnant people that has

no concept of peace and happiness,

war is their glory

 

Meticulous caution does nothing to bring safety

Thieves and murders haunt everyday lives

Religion is remonstrated

People say God Does not exist

Eyes need to become transparent

See the world that he created,

resuscitate it to the way he wanted it to be with

              LOVE

                   HAPPINESS

                                KINDNESS

       PEACE

 

 

 

 

                         

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For the creative poetry group! Words I had to use is in my tag box!

What do you think?

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I htink this one is amazing and very well written, Nicely Done my friend, Nicely Done.

[Loner]

Another master piece by you.

[sharonlee]

Cleverly Created, with great impact. How do I join this group?


Peace & Friendship

[Samuel Dickens]

You've done a great job while presenting a valuable lesson on life.

[Dream Weaver]

A perfect pondering piece of wisdom you have here
with enigmatic write. Well done...

[Chris]

I'm not a good one for organizing thoughts to another's word choice. The ideas were worth speaking of...

Take care,
Chris

[Star Wolf]

Awesome write! It's hard to see and cling to any goodness sometimes, let alone have faith in it, when we are so overwhelmed with so much darkness, uncaring, destruction and evil. But we can have faith goodness still exists.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Nicely done...God is the answer...the way out of this ever increasing darkness the world is being plunged into.

[Shep]

Very true indeed I felt the stillness as the words embraced me. Loved it loved it.

[InkSlinger]

Delightful imagery to this sweet little poem.. Like the feel and flow.. Overall, nicely done!!