Isn't She Beautiful?

A man and his love.

 

She is beautiful in her old age

In his eyes she is etravagant

Life without her would be incomplete

A journey that is filled with

adventure she takes him on

His eyes sees others,

but they are no comparison

Exterior is complimentary

Easy on the eyes

Her interior has a mind of its on

In the cold winter months she keeps him warm

When it is hot and sultry she keeps him cool

Her voices sings sweet soothing music

Times when she is away his days

and nights are lonely

Inside of her he feels on high

Each day he takes her out he proceeds

with extreem caution

After all she is his prize possession

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Ah yes, the car! It's very important, transportation to a man, whether it be a horse, car or what ever comes along in the future! I enjoyed this. The ending made me chuckle. Great job!

[Star Wolf]

Great! I didn't see that one coming! A man's love affair with cars....it seems its not going out of style as long as we still have cars!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

All men do love their cars...
It's neat how you made it sound like a woman at first.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Yes a man certainly loves his car...somethimes nothing better than driving and thinking or relaxing etc...you captiured the whole sense terifficly :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Your last few lines are what really clenched this for me. At first I thought for sure you were talking about someone but then as I read it turned into something rather and I was delighted to read something like this.

[Shep]

Music to my ears. Such sweet romance. Awesome poem.

[KAREN]

I love the twist in this poem! Brilliant write!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nothing compares to the bond that takes this long to forge.

[Ruth]

Love the way it is not what it seems...but you do that alot...I admire that love! I thought this was so cool :) xx