Pillow Of No Regretts

Marriage ending

 

He is desperate to leave

Time is no more

Trembling hands fold into her lap

She is lost in times of rejoicement

A flower garden filled with fragrance of attraction

 

His gentle charm was unique and fashionable

Personality whimisical and romantic

Love unraveled at first sight

A guiding light of attraction flowed

 

Intimate times were magical

Imagination played an essential part

Bodies harmonized with beautiful music

Passion and desire weaved into ecstasy

Orgasms delicious

 

They had floated on clouds of dreams

Making each one a reality

Sunshine spills over each day she has spent with him

She has no regretts

 

Her love for him is unfinished

His love for her has paled

She touchs her wedding ring

Only the imprint of his is visible

 

Dew drop tears threaten to fall

Shards of pain cut the interior of her heart

Words of no regrett echos in her defeated mind

She won't beg him to stay

 

He is on the threshhold of leaving

Mind has been gone

Flesh just living as a ghost

The end has come

 

Her sullens eyes implore him

Suitcase in hand

Back to her

He walks out the door

Dew drop tears fall on a pillow of no regretts

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Shardbearer99]

That was an incredible beautiful, intimate, and powerful piece of poetry. It was engaging, filled with emotion. Lovely!

[Tony]

so beautifully sad, it kind of makes me want to run and catch him and shake him out of his skin, asking how he could do this to someone so devoted to him.
Your emotional expressions and the language of your words are excellent. The reader can feel this sadness.

[WindSong]

A very charming and beautiful poem filled with romance! Well written!

WindSong

[Morning Star]

Wow beautifully written and expressed thoughts
I feel some pain within your words
Words captured some beautiful images
Excellent poem
Have an awesome day!

[Star Wolf]

I feel the pain deeply in this poem. Brilliantly written.

[Brad]

sad and cutting

[Jibey]

Cleverly written story of impossible love... but described with imaginative delight, the attraction, the charm, the intimate pleasure...the pain

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a very heartbreaking tale that can happen and does happen to many. I believe things can be fixed if both people want try hard enough but well there aren't always happy endings.

[Marie Harrison]

Her sullens eyes implore him
Suitcase in hand
Back to her
He walks out the door
Dew drop tears fall on a pillow of no regretts

Very sad poem. Isn't that like a woman?
Even while he's left her she still has no
regret over being with him.