Waiting Patiently

A true love right under her nose.

 

Heart empty and cold

Feelings of loneliness is overwhelming

She needs someone to hold

Eyes search for that special man

To have and to hold

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

Dates she has been on

Just acquaintances

Out for fun

No one looking for commitment

Is there anyone?

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

He has loved her forever

Why can't she see he is the man she seeks?

His heart is out there waiting to be complete

Only if she will let it be

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

She sees him only as a friend

Someone to hang out with

He wants to be more

The man she makes love to

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

He searches her eyes for clues of recognition

She smiles at him

Lips lightly touch hers

Time stands still

What is that she feels?

 

After all this time

She finally sees

The man she has been searching for

has been waiting patiently

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Jibey]

It happens... and we can all hope :-)

Someone to hold and to make love to... Yes...

[Linear]

Aww that's just so sweet, unfortunately it dosent always happen like that, but I do love a happy ending, lovely poem :0)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the way you paced this poem. Sometime love is near and we don't realize till we are desperate and the good friend pick us up and make us strong again. I enjoyed the complete poem. A perfect ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Marie Harrison]

Ah... this was very sweet.
Well done!

[closed]

I always find your pen to key just the write notes Imagination, especially in affairs of love and romance. I enjoyed this write in what could very well be your forte'^ And we can be sure that love always finds a way^