Waiting Patiently

A true love right under her nose.

 

Heart empty and cold

Feelings of loneliness is overwhelming

She needs someone to hold

Eyes search for that special man

To have and to hold

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

Dates she has been on

Just acquaintances

Out for fun

No one looking for commitment

Is there anyone?

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

He has loved her forever

Why can't she see he is the man she seeks?

His heart is out there waiting to be complete

Only if she will let it be

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

She sees him only as a friend

Someone to hang out with

He wants to be more

The man she makes love to

 

After all this time

She still does not see

He is right there

Waiting patiently

 

He searches her eyes for clues of recognition

She smiles at him

Lips lightly touch hers

Time stands still

What is that she feels?

 

After all this time

She finally sees

The man she has been searching for

has been waiting patiently

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

A very positive love poem with a happy ending. Her hearts desire was right there with her all alone! Nicely done, I enjoyed this a lot!

[Star Wolf]

I love this! Sometimes the treasure is right there under our noses and I guess its just too close to see it right away. Excellent poem!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i agree. some times it takes a very long time to find that right person.. but dont let go when you found them

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Wonderful! It takes time for the heart to wake up and see what's right there...what we've been looking and hoping for. Very tender and romantic.

[Darl]

Im one of those guys waiting patiently. Very romantic and a very enjoyable read.

[Krystal Nicole]

I love romantic poems!! And I loved the. . hmmm, what would I call it?. .. storyline of this poem! Awesome job!!

[LA Lorena]

A very sweet poem. Sometimes that which we seek IS right in front of us, waiting patiently for us to open our eyes and see that we have always had the answer.

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautiful and heartfelt.

[Poetic Beauty]

many times we do not notice what is right under our noses when it come to love. The person we seek is usually right there. I love this write and the repeating part of this poem.

[Brad]

beautiful ending