Poseidon The Travel Agent

Creative Poetry Group

 

Poseidon god of the sea have mercy on me.

Take your trident and send me on a vacation, a secluded beach where the waves relax me. The vigorous pace of my busy life has shook my insides like an earthquake, crumbling me to exhaustion. Peace and quiet is all I need, nothing but the mysterious sea nymphs singing in their beautiful sirens voices to sooth me. Poseidon, my mature man, can you please help me?

Author's Note

Had to pick a god or goddess to write about using the words in my tag box. I picked Poseidon god of the sea. I had a hard time writing this one, finally this came to mind, so I went with it! Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[blakjassy]

This is such a creative use of the words and a sentiment i am sure almost every reader can relate to and engage with.

I love the simplicity in this yet it is still packed full of descriptive language

[Marie Harrison]

Love this, boy do I need Posideon to bless me with a marina vacation! I love the smell and the warm salty waters of the sea with the sun shining down. Perfect poem to read in the evening. :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is a Slam Dunk. I needed this one.
You took the words right out of my mouth.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is really cool, especially the use of those words. Very cleverly written.