Poseidon The Travel Agent

Creative Poetry Group

 

Poseidon god of the sea have mercy on me.

Take your trident and send me on a vacation, a secluded beach where the waves relax me. The vigorous pace of my busy life has shook my insides like an earthquake, crumbling me to exhaustion. Peace and quiet is all I need, nothing but the mysterious sea nymphs singing in their beautiful sirens voices to sooth me. Poseidon, my mature man, can you please help me?

Author's Note

Had to pick a god or goddess to write about using the words in my tag box. I picked Poseidon god of the sea. I had a hard time writing this one, finally this came to mind, so I went with it! Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i really like this.... great job sorry i havent been around much

[Mockingbird]

this came out excellent. i like the image of poseidon and his trident, god of the sea. the plight of the narrator is prevalent in today's high-paced world. water has always been a soothing reference. great poem!

[Mauricio Montoya]

love it!
Excellent write.

[Shardbearer99]

You have a great way of drawing your reader in with the words that you in creating your poems. This was fun and relaxing to read, a highly enjoyable poem to be loved by all.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A really fun piece to read! If only.....

[Judy Ponceby]

Wonderful use of the words! And can I go with you, I promise to be quiet! LOL

[Dream Weaver]

Beside the itty bitty typo (Earthquake)
This is a really good, I would have like
to have seen maybe a little more, but
overall very good....

[Star Wolf]

Who best to ask to arrange a sea vacation? A fun and enjoyable poem.

[Tina Kline]

I really like this...hope Poseidon sends you on that vacation. A very enjoyable and fun poem!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Wow...
I am speechless.

SO FAR, YOUR BEST WRITE I HAVE EVER READ.
(and THAT says A LOT.)

And you really nailed all the details!