Magical Hands

For the Creative Poetry Group: A young woman needs some rest.

Muscles maltreated by stress and hard work.

Relaxation gone on vacation.

Insomnia has taken residence in her battered body. Once peaceful nights are a distant memory. Resilience has resigned.

Energetic life now exsicated.

 

She lays on the table of revival in a remote resort. Strong hands of dexterity massage stressful body. Feelings of therapeutic healing stimulate her senses. She's drifting off into a passion filled wonderland.

 

Hands sensous bring an aphrodisiac effect.

Soft moans of pleasure escape lips of need.

Mind withers in the heat of desire.

Coherent thoughts come begging,

please don't stop.

 

Tiredness vanish as her body soars into ecstasy. "Yes baby do it to me!" She exclaims. Moment is lost as a male voice murmurs, "Miss, your massage is over. Face becomes effervescent as eyes discern her where abouts.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think! Words are in my tag box that I had to use!

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

A very sensual and clever poem. I love the humor at the end!

[Dream Weaver]

Very sensuous as well as clever...You keep writing like this
and I'll be out of a job and soon :P

[Tina Kline]

A very amusing ending! The cold shock of the fantasy ending and reality hitting home! I really enjoyed this!

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

This seems like more of a personal story than an actual poem. I have to say that there was a lot of repetition in describing how she felt. This could have easily been a six line poem, I think. Nevertheless, despite the few grammatical errors it was not a bad piece. Good work.

[hmarieee]

Haha not what i expected and a funny twist to the end, but i still liked it. Nice write hun.

[Brad]

i hate that when relaxation goes on sabbatical without me :(

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice write.
Completely different than what I expected from seeing the title.

[Krystal Nicole]

The ending is kindof funny to me, but I enjoyed reading like usual. Great job!

[Demetri J]

Interesting to say the least. Not an ending one would expect but nonetheless enjoyable.