Magical Hands

For the Creative Poetry Group: A young woman needs some rest.

Muscles maltreated by stress and hard work.

Relaxation gone on vacation.

Insomnia has taken residence in her battered body. Once peaceful nights are a distant memory. Resilience has resigned.

Energetic life now exsicated.

 

She lays on the table of revival in a remote resort. Strong hands of dexterity massage stressful body. Feelings of therapeutic healing stimulate her senses. She's drifting off into a passion filled wonderland.

 

Hands sensous bring an aphrodisiac effect.

Soft moans of pleasure escape lips of need.

Mind withers in the heat of desire.

Coherent thoughts come begging,

please don't stop.

 

Tiredness vanish as her body soars into ecstasy. "Yes baby do it to me!" She exclaims. Moment is lost as a male voice murmurs, "Miss, your massage is over. Face becomes effervescent as eyes discern her where abouts.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think! Words are in my tag box that I had to use!

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job in bringing this together.

[Valentine]

Surprised ne middo..still recouperating..Kathie

[Shardbearer99]

Rather intimate and alluring. I love your use of vocabularly. Your writing has definitely come a long, long way. Thoroughly enjoyable and a talent to watch out for in the future.

[Kate Hunter]

well written.

[Jibey]

A pleasing kind of dream... if only!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting work..Maybe passionate...I am glad that I chose this one as one of the few that I could read today..Sunflower

[Matt Shriver]

Awesome. Well done.

[Linear]

Lol now that's what I call an ending, hmmm not letting the wife go to the massage parlour no more lol

[?]

haha love that ending, very clever

Now the beginning is exactly how I feel stressed and over worked. I have yet to find the remote resort, but from the ending of this piece Im gonna be looking a little harder. lol
Loved it!!

[Poetic Beauty]

Ha ha love the ending. One of those oops moments when you should not talk in your sleep.