Creative Writing

For the Creative Poetry Group challenge!

 

Words flow from my submissive brain  on to paper.

My  joyful muse encourages me to write.

I'm optimistic that it will be talented.

Acute doubts  over whelm me.

Will it be good?

I try to be genteel to myself as I write,

but there are times that I feel sensitive and soft

of what writerscafe may think,

but as I read reviews I feel tender at heart.

Grateful  for friends who review with honesty no matter what.

 

Author's Note

Had to write about myself using the words: Joyful, Submissive, Optimistic, Tender, Soft, Sensitive, Genteel.
Tell me what you think.
tried to under line each word, got two but then it wouldn't work!

Reviews

[frozensakura]

wonderful write(:

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Writing is good for the soul and you show us how good.

[Jeremy Baker]

I know this feeling!

[Coyote Poetry]

You made a powerful poem using some strong words.
"I try to be genteel to myself as I write,
but there are times that I feel sensitive and soft
of what writerscafe may think,"
Thank you for you amazing poetry.
Coyote