Yes Baby I Need You

A wife needs affection from her husband.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Roses,

Marigolds,

Chrysanthemums,

all adorn the spring garden in full bloom.

 

Butterflies,

Humming Birds,

Bumble Bees,

suck sweet nectar, caressing each flower in gentle love. The sun unfolds its rays in an embraceable hug. Rain drops fall in a chorus of musical fashion, giving them tender

loving care.

 

YES BABY I NEED YOU!

 

She lays on the bed of need, longing to be blossomed in love like her spring garden.

but weeds of....

I'm too tired

or

I'm too busy

chokes the romance from her life.

Lack of circulation of loving feelings leave her lifeless.

 

YES BABY I NEED YOU!

 

Sensuailty,

Affection,

Ecstasy,

are in  full bloom, hovering above her. Their romantic behavior tease her into longing. She wishes he would unfold his arms in an embraceable hug, to shower love upon her in a musical melodious fashion, giving her the attention she craves.

 

YES BABY I NEED YOU!

 

He walks in the room.

She lays motionless, yearning to feel his desire for her again. His eyes dim like the eclipse of the moon. Romance soars as flutters of excitement brings her on edge of ready for his eccentric love making.

 

YES BABY I NEED YOU!

 

Intellect hands explore her waiting body. Intense need crosses intersections with desire. His smile wraps her in affection. Lips suck the sweet nectar of succulent skin.

 

YES BABY I NEED YOU!

 

Sensuality,

Affection,

Ecstasy,

cover them in nurturing soil. Their garden of love blossoms into life as they reach the peak of passion. Bodies at ovation.

 

OH YES BABY I NEEDED YOU!

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

This has some great lines:
Love the usage of 'to be blossomed' gives it a passive feel.
And the metaphor of weeds of 'I'm tired' growing through her otherwise passionate 'garden'... Brilliant.
I also love the emphasis that the repetition of similar terms (musical melodious) gives to that line.
And dims like the eclipse of the moon - what a wonderfully creative image. It filled my vision as I read it.
And the line need crosses intersections with desire, flowed so melodically and again brought a great picture to my mind
And lastly -bodies at ovation, what a wonderful (almost hidden) wordplay.
Great job
Keep writing!

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautifully written. Great job!!

[Brad]

this has a distant sadness in it, maybe i'm just comparing it to my own past and the way things go...but to me, it sounds as if things have dried up in a long relationship.

[Jeremy Baker]

I loved being on the journey these words took me on - always do!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Took me on a very emotional and passionate journey in your words.
I like the repetition. Made the poem strong and meaningful. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Star Wolf]

Wonderful! Perfectly erotic and romantic with a happy ending for both of them. This little romance was a job to read!

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"Lips suck the sweet nectar of succulent skin."
That line was incredibly tasteful.
I saw a couple of grammatical errors, but the poem was good besides that =).