Heat Wave (Creative Poetry Challenge)

Summer at its hottest.

 

Noxious sun in a blue sky,

rays an inferno of heat.

Sweat glistens on casanova men,

hitting on women as they walk by

in their string bikinis.

The sandy terra beach is filled with

tanned bodies laying on towels,

verve children splashing in the

forment blue ocean.

Alleviation of breeze does nothing

to cool things off.

Over heated people feel gelatinous

as the heat wave presses on.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ladysue]

oh nice visions of the ocean and all that goes along with being there. good use of the words...nicely done..