Heat Wave (Creative Poetry Challenge)

Summer at its hottest.

 

Noxious sun in a blue sky,

rays an inferno of heat.

Sweat glistens on casanova men,

hitting on women as they walk by

in their string bikinis.

The sandy terra beach is filled with

tanned bodies laying on towels,

verve children splashing in the

forment blue ocean.

Alleviation of breeze does nothing

to cool things off.

Over heated people feel gelatinous

as the heat wave presses on.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Ah, this made me feel hot! You got a summer heat wave down perfect. I really enjoyed this a lot.

[Ruth]

Know the feeling of late lol
You always take an experience and turn into word form wonderment :)
xx

[Crowley]

I am in the middle of this heat wave as we speak. 117 degrees yesterday and 110 today. There is something grounding about the hat though as opposed to the cold I think. Reminded me of mexico...I love me some Mexico. Nice job.

[Dream Weaver]

This must be that humid kind of hot.
You know the one where everyone is
miserable and complaining..Great description!

[Brad]

you've taken something like paradise and turned it into something menacing, i loved it, one of my new faves from you

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

I could feel the heat of this piece~
very wonderful descriptions.
Great joB~

[Jeremy Baker]

Very effective metaphors - great work!

[Maya Storm]

HOT!!! Extremely, intensely hot!!!!
There is nothing else to say....
Oh wait, there is... :) You actually painted a picture of heat very well... this piece is hot!!!

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautifully written. Everything flows very well together