Heat Wave (Creative Poetry Challenge)

Summer at its hottest.

 

Noxious sun in a blue sky,

rays an inferno of heat.

Sweat glistens on casanova men,

hitting on women as they walk by

in their string bikinis.

The sandy terra beach is filled with

tanned bodies laying on towels,

verve children splashing in the

forment blue ocean.

Alleviation of breeze does nothing

to cool things off.

Over heated people feel gelatinous

as the heat wave presses on.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes a day at the beach with the kids. I do like the view. Hard to watch when kids are in view and needed to be watched. Good description took me to the beach on a hot sunny day. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

I think you've done a great job, the words blind in where one can visualize as they read on. nice work.

[Marie Harrison]

Very creative, nice use of your words.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this and the last part had me laughing out loud. This is so true of the beach. All the fun in the sun.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Imaginative and impressive..!!!!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This feels like one of those really hot and humid days when you can't get any relief what so ever. Excellent work on this1

[knowman]

I think it made me want to go swimming, very discriptive, and shows much feeling of the time.

[Tina Kline]

Impressive write, just reading it makes me feel the heat here just a little bit more. You did a wonderful job on this write. I'm dreaming of the chill breezes of fall now!

[?]

I think it describes the heat wave wonderfully,
it has trully been really hot, hot, hot. Did I mention it was hot? lol
I need a nice cold glass of lemonade now, after reading this.
Nicely done