Love's Enduring Journey

A love between man and wife!

 

Their love is a reflection of one another,

an emotion felt in the heart,

seen by the eyes, strong and perpetual.

Inquistive bodies sensous and eager to explore.

An attraction of a magnet force pulling them together.

A connection of chemistry keeps them moving toward the future.

Flirtatious rhythm keeps them in tune.

Expression of desire mingles with intimacy,

making their interior soul come to life.

Contagious love brings feelings of irresistible passion.

Affectionate embroideries a path to their heart, adjacenting

with admiration for each other.

Characiteristics entwin, making them unique and fashionable.

Memories in the looking glass show a picture of love.

Heart, mind and body concrescence,

making their love an entrance to eternity.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[L]

Strong sentiment, and your theme is admirable. Some fine lines here. I do feel that you hamper the flow by closing to many of the lines off with periods/full stops though. Also the centre-alignment doesn't often work for me, but that's just a taste thing :) Nice piece

[Dream Weaver]

I dig the positive vibes here, almost fairly tale like...
If there is such a thing between a man and his wife
it would seem out of place in this divorce driven
world today.. Beautifully Done ....

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful tale of love and it reminds me of the love my grandparent had for each other. their life was a hard one and they over came many struggles and through it all till their dying days they loved each other deeply.

[?]

Heart, mind and body concrescence,
making their love an entrance to eternity.
Oh when man and woman become one, within each other.
Awesome poem, loved everybit of it

[Star Wolf]

Awesome! Love can be the most wonderful of things if its real and both people really want it so they're willing to make it work.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I'm loving this poem. The two hearts here combined to become one.

[Tina Kline]

This is very beautiful, tender and romantic. Making love last, its what we all hope for! Wonderful!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This sounds like what love is. Very romantic with an important message about what love is. Outstanding poem!

[Ladysue]

'Making their love an entrance to eternity' that has to be the most beautiful line I have read in a long time..deep and meaningful indeed...this was stunning...