Love's Enduring Journey

A love between man and wife!

 

Their love is a reflection of one another,

an emotion felt in the heart,

seen by the eyes, strong and perpetual.

Inquistive bodies sensous and eager to explore.

An attraction of a magnet force pulling them together.

A connection of chemistry keeps them moving toward the future.

Flirtatious rhythm keeps them in tune.

Expression of desire mingles with intimacy,

making their interior soul come to life.

Contagious love brings feelings of irresistible passion.

Affectionate embroideries a path to their heart, adjacenting

with admiration for each other.

Characiteristics entwin, making them unique and fashionable.

Memories in the looking glass show a picture of love.

Heart, mind and body concrescence,

making their love an entrance to eternity.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[limbalring]

So beautiful. A love to strive for.

[Lina Grey]

Beautiful write! Had some minor spelling/grammatical errors, such as "eagar" should be "eager", but presents an intense situation and uses lovely sensual language to express such intimate emotions. Very well-written. Thank you.

[Valentine]

Love the line starting with Memories...some typos but very nice otherwise..Kathie

[Mauricio Montoya]

Well this piece sure describe what it can be when two become one feelings and all.
Excellent write

[WindSong]

Quite a beautiful write with wonderful imagery. I very much enjoyed reading this lovely work!

[Maya Storm]

I think it's a wonderful piece of what a union should be. It was easy to read, a pleasure actually, and this is what I want my love to look like.

I especially liked that you did not make it about you (very unusual)... You narrated a moment between two lovers and it could be about anyone really. In which case it's about me :). I loved it, spectacular write!!!

[An owl on the moon]

You weave into your words so much that is found within the nature of lovers... heart, mind and body.. yes... Beautifully enchanted with a movement and music.

[Peggy Gildon]

WOW! Wow! Beautiful, Incredible piece of true love. From beginning to end the flow was awesome the imagery fantastic. Seems it was the kind of love of our grandparents.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastic..!!!

[OT]

Expression of desire mingles with intimacy,
making their interior soul come to life. - love these lines - and your vocabulary in this one is great! nice job!